开放作文(15分)是北京高考英语的一个亮点题型,旨在考查考生用英语思考和表达的能力。近几年北京卷的开放作文基本都是给出单幅漫画式图片,要求考生“描述图画内容并表达对这幅画的理解”,主要选取贴近考生生活或与考生成长密切相关的话题,如家庭教育、成功失败、优点缺点、人与环境的关系等。写好这类作文的关键在于立意正确和逻辑合理——这也正好符合高考书面表达对考生“逻辑性强”的最新要求。但从近几年高考情况来看,考生实际得分并不理想,该题全北京市平均分低至四分左右,是北京考生高考英语的一大难题所在。对此,笔者有一个好方法与广大考生分享——“起承转合”法。
方法概述
“起承转合”本是汉语诗文写作结构章法方面的术语。“起”即起因,是开头;“承”即承接上文加以申述;“转”即转折,从正、反面加以论述;“合”即结束,是结尾。这四者互相依存、互为作用,有着严密的逻辑性,体现着很强的辩证关系。具体到高考英语北京卷的开放作文,“起”就是通过大体描述图中人物/事物及其关系,开好头,为全文主题作好铺垫,埋下伏笔,一般称之为描图。“承”就是在此基础上继续挖掘图画想要表达的深层含义,确立主题,也叫解图。“转”是转而联系生活中的类似现象,结合实际,深化主题,又称议图。“合”就是结合图画再次突出主题,给出最后结论,也可称为“圆”图。
实战演练
一起来看两道高考英语北京卷的真题。
真题1:
2010年普通高等学校招生全国统一考试(北京卷)
第二节 开放作文(15分)
请根据下面提示,写一篇短文。词数不少于50。
In your spoken English class, your teacher shows you the following picture. You are asked to describe the picture and explain how you understand it.
【解题支招】
起:In the picture, a big tree grows between two closely-located buildings. (直接描述图中内容,为确定主题作铺垫。必须至少提到树和楼这两个要素)
承:Unlike most trees, this one bends in the middle, struggling all the way up to get more sunshine. (描述图中细节,挖掘图画内涵,讲清树和楼的关系,确立主题)
转:The picture reminds me of those who succeed in unfavorable conditions. Faced with difficulties, they never give up but try their best to find a way out. (联系实际,讲现实生活中类似图中树与楼关系的成长与困难环境,深化主题)
合:Life can be hard. But if we have courage and determination, we will finally get the "sunshine" we want as the tree in the picture does. (紧扣主题,得出结论,巧妙“圆”图)
真题2:
2007年普通高等学校招生全国统一考试(北京卷)
第二节 开放作文(15分)
请根据下面提示,写一篇短文。词数不少于50。
In your English class, you are asked to describe the following picture and explain to your classmates how you understand it.
【解题支招】
起:In this picture, a mother bird sits on her nest in a big tree, watching her babies fly away. (描述图中的大鸟与小鸟。本部分也可以用这样的句子开头:As can be seen in the picture, ...)
承:I think the mother bird must be very proud of her children, who are able to find their own food now. But she may also feel a sense of loss since they no longer need her day-to-day care as they used to. (解读大鸟与小鸟的关系。这里还可以用下面的句子引领:I think the picture is trying to convey a message that ...)
转:This picture shows very well the mixed feelings of parents when watching their children grow up. For my parents, things will be much easier. We will set up a family blog to post our photos, journals, and even audio. (联系实际的社会生活,引申到父母与孩子的关系。这里可以用的句子还有:This picture leaves me in deep thought./This phenomena is not unusual in our daily life.)
合:Once I leave for college, we can conveniently share our experiences and support each other no matter wherever we are. My parents' "nest" will never be empty. (呼应图画,升华主题。这里需要特别指出,最后一句巧妙地在nest上用一个引号呼应所描图画,实在是点睛之笔,很值得大家学习。)
通过以上两篇例文我们可以看出,只要运用好“起承转合”,就不难摆脱对开放作文“无话可说”或“言之无序”的困境,圆满完成写作任务。这样一来,得个满意的分数也就是自然而然的事了。为方便记忆和应用,同学们可参考如下口诀:
开放作文,其实好写;立意高远,起承转合。
首先描图,生动简洁;思考内涵,深入挖掘。
转入实际,联系生活;善用引号,自圆其说。
祝大家高考英语开放作文写作顺利!